Fixing Sentences

This is my last three weeks of college; I am getting really excited.(3)
I am so glad that I'm finally done with school. (simple)
Now I can settle down where ever I want and start a family. (simple)
Do I move to some other state, or should I stay close to my family incase I'm ever in need for some help. (2)
I would really enjoy somewhere out of this state; however not too far away.(4)
I'll miss so many people from school.(simple)
I'm thinking that I have enough strength to start my own life; I want to show the world what I can do.(3)
I feel that I have the motivation; drive to keep me going. (3)
My people skills have gotten so much better since high school. (simple)
I hope that the other people that are suppose to graduate don't mess up.(simple)
Although the other students are happy, they look nervous.(5)

Life is About to Begin

This is my last three weeks of college left and I am getting really excited. I am so glad that I'm finally done with school. Now I can settle down where ever I want and start a family. Do I move to some other state or should I stay close to my family incase I'm ever in need for some help. I would really enjoy some out of this state but not too far away. I'll miss so many people from this school.

I'm thinking that I have enough strength to start my own life and show the world what I can do. I feel that I have the motivation and drive to keep me going. My people skills have gotten so much better since high school. I just hope that the other people that graduate don't mess up. I can see on their faces that they are kind of nervous.

Sentence pattern practice

The bugs flew out of control, and they splattered on the windshield.

The bugs flew out of control; they splattered on the windshield.

The bugs flew out of control; moreover, they splattered on the windshield.

The bugs splattered on the windshield when they flew out of control.

When the bugs flew out of control, they splattered on the windshield.


The king was mad, and he stabbed somebody.

The king was mad; he stabbed somebody.

The king was mad; when he stabbed somebody.

When the king stabbed somebody he was mad.

This is Indispensable

What does indispensable mean to you. Some people think that its the most priced possession, or something that values the most. I think its all the little things that people love. With out the little indpensable stuff how could you really know what you price or love the most. I just saying my opinnion because its my blog and I feel like the little things in life are more important to me. I love the weather when its not hot, but not cold. I love to sit in the aircondition and hangout with friends. These are just some excamples of the little things that people pass by. So whats really your indispensable possession.



Reflection

i feel that i had a pretty easy time writing this because i felt like just letting go and writing what i was thinking like i am right now.

You want the Truth

To be honest my writing experiences have really been a big interest to me. I don't mind doing it to past time, but i'll only do it if its an assignment. My experiences with writing has been challenging but I've been able to work threw it. I don't mind writing i just don't like research papers. Its to easy to run out of ideas on one subject.

I've done auto-biographies about people that i don't know and that i have never meet before. I could really care less about meeting these people its just good to learn from there mistakes and how they treated others. I think that these wrightings are they best and that it affects people more because they are real people not some fictional character.

The most important thing i hope to learn in this class is that I want to be able to have the experience and knowledge of others. I don't want to be left behind just because I didn't like to wright. I also want to see how other people think about this class and how they go threw life to see if i need to make some changes.

The Big Why

Why am i here when i could have chosen any other college. Why not, DSU has a great thing going for them. I love working and learning on computers which some what motivates me. I also chose DSU because none of my friends came here. I love meeting new people and i figured getting away would help with my people skills.

I chose DSU because i'm looking to further my education with computers. I feel that computers are going to be a big part in the furture and i want to be ready for anything. I like that the college really tries to encourage people to meet new people. The older students really like getting the fresh meat active in different groups and try to get use out of the box.

I hope to accomplish a new beginning while maintaining the old one. I hope to have a good time and accomplish meeting new friends. During my stay here i'm expecting myself to get good grades and get to know more people. I also want to get new and better habbits from other people too. I don't plan on being as shy as all the other freshman either because thats not how you meet new people.

My time here at DSU will change my future because I plan on practicing new skills and better habbits for the future. I plan on learning enough so that once i'm done here i can move on to better and greater things. I don't plan on making my time here not worth while.

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